Blog week 4

 BLOG WEEK 4 :) 

hello miss, im glad to say that i loved this last class, ive learned a lot about writing the most and I learned to be able to correct drafting mistakes.

you have to have a lot of patience since it is about reviewing the entire document, not just words or sentences, but also grammatical errors and commas and periods.

I really enjoyed the task that he left us, to talk about my favorite actress, and we used the prewriting techniques💕💗

Here I attach the homework:

Artist: Anya Taylor Joy

1st Stage: Prewriting -List

1.       is 25 years old

2.       She was born in April 16, 1996

3.       was born in Miami, Florida in the US.

4.       She had her childhood in argentina

5.       She moved to London

6.       Shes very talented

7.       She knows a lot of languages

8.       Her english is not her first language

 

2nd Stage: Drafting

Anya Taylor-Joy is 25 years old. She was born in April 16, 1996. was born in Miami, Florida in the US. She then spent her early childhood in Buenos Aires, Argentina before moving to London, England at the age of six. Her mother is British and Spanish and her father is Scottish and Argentinian. Shes quickly making a name for herself as one of the standout actresses of her generation. Over the past few years, she has appeared in everything from The Queen’s Gambit to The Witch.

A very intersting fact about Anya is that she has used a many different accents throughout her whole career, but her accent sounds mostly Englishwith an american accent. In an interview Anya said that she tends to mimic the accents of those around her quite easily because English is not her first language. and for me that is incredible and a great example to follow since his pronunciation is neat, I not only admire her for her great ability to understand, speak and express herself in different languages and speak them with such a perfect accent, she is also a very good and talented actress and I love watching all her series and movies.

3rd Stage: Revising. By Daniela Cortez.

Anya Taylor-Joy is 25 years old. She was born in April 16, 1996(,) in Miami, Florida. She then spent her early childhood in Buenos Aires, Argentina before moving to London, England at the age of six. Her mother is British and Spanish and her father is Scottish and Argentinian. She was quickly making a name for herself as one of the standout actresses of her generation. Over the past few years, she has appeared in everything (,) from The Queen’s Gambit to The Witch.

A very interesting fact about Anya is that she has used a many different accents throughout her whole career, but her accent sounds mostly English with an American accent. In an interview (,) Anya said that she tends to mimic the accents of those around her quite easily because English is not her first language. And for me(,) that is incredible and a great example to follow since her pronunciation is neat, I not only admire her for her great ability to understand, speak and express herself in different languages and speak them with such a perfect accent, she is also a very good and talented actress and I love watching all her series and movies.